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Bonjout merci de ma corriger les fautes dans ce texte :

I really wanted to tell you my story because I will feel better for the remaing days I have to live. Indeed I'm losing my health, I can't sleep anymore because everytime because as soon I close my eyes, atrocious pictures of my assault come to my mind. I close my eyes, atrocious pictures of my assault come to my mind. It was the 3rd of November 1980, my producer husband was setting up a show called Wonder's wild beast.. After the show I me found only in the backstage to tidy up suits when suddenly, a man wearing a wolf head as a mask threw himself on me, clawed me with his nails, bit me with his teeth. I tried to defend myself but in vain he pierced me the face. However, I managed to take off his mask and then I saw the worst thing of my life it was my husband who was trying to kill me this time I ran away a few minutes later. Since this day, my face is mutilated and I have many wounds on my body, but I'm above all, still shocked. I do not want to talk about it to the police because he's part of it since he tried to kill me! Please help me, but only talking about it made me feel better.

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  • I really wanted to tell you my story because I will feel better for the remaing days I have to live. Indeed I'm losing my health, I can't sleep anymore because everytime X (besoins de rien ici) I close my eyes, atrocious pictures of my assault come to my mind. (tu as mis 2 fois la même phrase) It was the 3rd of November 1980, my producer husband was setting up a show called Wonder's wild beast.. After the show I X (Pas besoins de "me") found only in the backstage to tidy up suits when suddenly, a man wearing a wolf head as a mask threw himself on me, clawed me with his nails, bit me with his teeth. (pas de besoins de préciser "avec ses dents"...) I tried to defend myself but in vain he pierced me the face. However, I managed to take off his mask and then I saw the worst thing of my life it was my husband who was trying to kill me this time I ran away a few minutes later. Since this day, my face is mutilated and I have many wounds on my body, but I'm above all, still shocked. I do not want to talk about it to the police because he's part of it since he tried to kill me! Please help me, but only talking about it made me feel better.

    Voilà ! Quelques fautes sans grosses importances, dans l'ensemble c'est bien, mais flippant xD
    A bientôt :)

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